As she gulped down the last drop of syrup from the bottle,
Acting as she loved it,
It had now become a thing in her hourly schedule,
She couldn’t unsee it, The void that was left for her,
An Eerie silence that demanded her patience,
Time does heal the scar, but for her, it was quite the opposite,
The scars ceased to heal,
Rather they chose to deepen,
The depth that her words couldn’t map,
As the family sat for dinner,
She was missed, Not because she called it a quit,
She enjoyed her time alone,
Filled her room with all the paintings she could ever draw when she had time,
Books scattered everywhere on her couch,
Whereas the Bed narrated a different story, It was peacefully quiet,
Wrapped in white, Not even a little budge on the bedsheet,
Unwrinkled & Untouched, hugging the mattress tight,
She never slept on it,
The drugs used put her to sleep,
The long nights reminded her of the night outs she used to have with her best friends,
It was quite nostalgic for her,
Because she had to tie friendship band to a new person this year,
It was the ailment she was undergoing,
Chemicals & Antibodies injected into her veins,
She was tired, The night was always endless for her,
Forcing herself to sleep, she used to gobble down the meds,
While the morning blues flushed her thoroughly,
Until one fine day, she won the fight,
This time it was forever,
She rested peacefully than ever before,
Her thirst for something she was longing for years,
Came to an End,
Quiet, Gorgeous & Blissful.
This is beautiful!
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Thanks much Devika 🙂
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Words woven perfectly together in the safe nest of emotions. Well done man. Keep going ✌
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Thanks much Miss. Your appreciation means a lot to me 🙂
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Oh that is a sad poem. But hopefully she’s free forever now.
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Well I put it in a skeptical end, this story was about a 6-year old kid who was suffering cancer and she won it, for the first time she slept peacefully, she no longer had to intake the tonic. She was free, the paintings referred to her drawings, basically lines drawn. I left it for the perspective of readers.
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I see. No wonder it felt so sad to me. At least she is not longer in pain.
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Right. Maybe I should add post script now onwards, haha. Thanks for your input Neel 🙂 Hope you’re staying safe. Take care.
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I interpreted it in a sad way, too! It didn’t feel like the story of a survivor. But, I’m happy the kid is safe.
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Thanks much Anisha for your read. Yes, we humans are singular perspective beings. We miss on many things and that’s quite alright. Keep Reading!!!
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Sure, sir. I’ll get around!
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Sure thing. You can call me Kalyan. Sir is quite overrated, isn’t it?
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Sure! ☺
I’ll do that the next time!
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Your imagination is wonderful, Mr. Storyteller! A story about pain, with a happy ending. 😍😊
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Haha thanks much Miss Ellen. Just trying to showcase different sides that we fail to see. Keep Reading ❤
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Sad, but beautifully done.
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Thanks much, Moushmi. Hope you’re doing great!
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https://truthiskef.wordpress.com/2020/05/26/ideal-inspiration-blogger-award/ (Hey, I have nominated you for an award. Check out this post for more)
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I’m honoured, Rohini. Your blog was an inspiration since a long time, and still is, but I got to read the posts i bookmarked since few weeks from your site. Stay Safe, Stay Happy. Thanks a ton for your kind words 🙂
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Thank you so much Kalyan! Glad you loved reading the posts. Kudos to your works and many many congratulations for the award 😀
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Thanks much, Miss 🙂
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Emotions are packed in this poem. Loved it to the core.
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The story of a survivor must be quite emotional. Thanks for giving this a read.
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